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高中高考英语 书面表达书信类,图表图画类,通知演讲稿类,记叙文短文投稿报道类 专题卷- 十年(2015-2024)高考真题英语分项汇编(全国通用)

高中高考英语 书面表达书信类,图表图画类,通知演讲稿类,记叙文短文投稿报道类 专题卷- 十年(2015-2024)高考真题英语分项汇编(全国通用)

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专题26书面表达书信类

2024

Writing 1

2024新课标&II卷】假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:

1)你完成的作品;

2)你的感想。

注意:

1)写作词数应为80个左右;

2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,

I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I’m writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.

We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.

The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.

In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

决定:decide→determine

整个的:entire→whole

提供:offer→provide

总之:in a word→in short

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.

拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.

【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)

 

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